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Originally Posted by Scott H
That’s well done. Very professional.
If I was to nitpick: I was surprised that I heard the terms “got shot” and “guns” instead of “eliminated” and “markers”.
Moms don’t like their kids getting shot by guns. Eliminated by markers sounds more likely to be approved by mom.
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Yes, this commercial would have been infinitely better if the director had removed all the excited, off-the-cuff remarks and replaced them with scenes of people tripping over BS newspeak that only matters to idiots. Just imagine how much someone would want to come play paintball after seeming some joyless 12 year old say "it was so great with I got *checks notes* marked with a gelatin compound by my friend."
Seriously, imagine being so convinced of the greatness of your chosen sport that you think the real reason Timmy's mom doesn't want to drive 2 hours to the middle of nowhere to spend $150 on paintball is that the evil commercial people used the wrong keyword.