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Old 12-02-2004, 04:29 PM #1
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Chris check this out fo real!

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The long hair is the sheezy!
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Old 12-02-2004, 04:31 PM #2
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Whoa man thats shizat dats tight bro.
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Old 12-02-2004, 04:47 PM #3
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Yet again, nice drawing.
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Old 12-02-2004, 04:50 PM #4
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i saw that a long time ago. looks great, just taking a long time to work on it.
to bad they changed names though.....now you have an old jersey on there
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Old 12-02-2004, 04:54 PM #5
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so what...
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yeah its badass, except for the ME
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Old 12-02-2004, 07:02 PM #7
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i used a square graph...no rulers...and everything looks totally natural to me

edit-thanks for the advice...but if you want to point out so many minor errors...pm me so you don't make me look like i suck when i don't...
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Old 12-02-2004, 07:05 PM #8
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if you can't tell...the leg is pointing a little off to the side...that's why it makes it look big...2...the shoulders look perfect...3...he's holding the gun under his armpit which is why the gun is pointed at that angle
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Old 12-02-2004, 07:11 PM #9
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I'm one of the most anally perfectionist artists, so don't be offended if I point out a lot of errors.
You don't suck at all! It looks really good, but as you can see, I'm just a perfectionist when it comes to art, so if I point out a lot of stuff, don't worry. I'm just being obsessive compulsive

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Old 12-02-2004, 07:24 PM #10
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hopefully i explained some of the stuff well enough now that you understand that they're not mistakes
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Old 12-02-2004, 07:31 PM #11
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UPDATED! sorry can't get the leg done tonight cuz i left blue at school...
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Old 12-02-2004, 08:12 PM #12
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I'm one of the most anally perfectionist artists, so don't be offended if I point out a lot of errors.

Looks like you've used a ruler on many parts. The pencil lines get dark then light then dark again, which is NOT a good thing, since this isn't charcoal.

I'm guessing that you used a B or an HB pencil on computer paper and are coloring it with colored pencils. You may want to clean up those lines a bit. While you're at it, clean up your coloring a bit also.

Now, on to the fun part. I realize how hard it is to capture motion and make it look natural, since I suck at it also.

Well.... To start off, I want to say that the shoulders look....dislocated. You can use a little work on your hands, too. The gun seems to be pointing at an unnatural angle compared to the angle of the arm and hand that's holding it. The pod looks a little thin, also, but I'm not exactly sure how big gloryboy's body parts are, so that is making my critiques a little inaccurate.

Compared to everything else, the goggles seem WAY too oversimplified (?). The creases on the right shoulder of the jersey also looks a little too perfect (too straight). The air bunker seems a little sharp also.

One question: Is the left leg going to be colored all the way to the line on the left? If it is, the legs look too fat. If not, then what's that space going to be used for?

I would be able to say more if the picture you uploaded was a little bigger, but it looks pretty small on a 1600 x 1200 resolution, so I won't say much more.

All in all, it looks like a great project. I hope you're having fun while drawing this.


Why didnt you just say the whole thing sucks, instead of writing all of that, i think you covered it all. The drawing in no way is imperfect, looks awesome....great job.
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Old 12-02-2004, 08:22 PM #13
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so basically you're saying it's PERFECT! lol

now that's how you earn points...everyone pull out they damn notebooks and jot that **** down
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hopefully i explained some of the stuff well enough now that you understand that they're not mistakes
Yep, yep. I studied a picture that's like what you're drawing looks like, and everything does look uneven at that perspective.

I'm dumb.
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Old 12-02-2004, 08:36 PM #15
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Re: Chris check this out fo real!

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you've got a bad perspective...because my drawing is near exact to the source...
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Old 12-02-2004, 08:38 PM #17
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AyanamiRei - no offense but it seems like your looking for anything negative about the drawing (none that I can see).. Maybe to try and prove that you have art skills to or something? I don't know.. But I don't see how you find anything in their wrong.. Especially the coloring, that is a 100% pimp coloring job..

But i'm not an artsy person so I wouldn't know.. But i've also seen the real picture and that looks pretty bang on.
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I personally, think you traced most of it, if thats real, then nice job.
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Old 12-02-2004, 08:39 PM #19
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hey digits...you think you could make me a special avatar...i'll send you a print copy when it's done...
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moogar...you need to go look at my old thread...i've already covered everything in it and i hate to have to keep explaining people how i used the graph method...
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You don't suck at all! It looks really good, but as you can see, I'm just a perfectionist when it comes to art, so if I point out a lot of stuff, don't worry. I'm just being obsessive compulsive

Be anal about your own drawings not someone elses, I really dont think he came here to have people point out his mistakes, he probaly has someone else he knows that can do that for him.

you just come off looking like a dick, even if your intentions were pure. Which I dont think they were. You just wanted to look like an artistic genius.
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