I'm usually not a fan of manipulations like that unless really well done.. As for yours, is he trying to grab the dialogue box? If so, wouldn't his hand be in a different position? As it is now, it's a little awkward. Also, horizon is tilted (or seems to be). Also, the screen exposure is fine but the rest is underexposed.
Advice: Find a different location/lighting/use HDR to get everything exposed correctly since it's such a simple shot (pre-post). Maybe incorporate the desktop background into the picture instead of having mountains and a dialogue box. Let the work speak for itself instead of words: i.e. maybe use secret agent-y type lasers with an object in the middle, having the hand navigate those to get the prize, etc. Also, not sure how much of the arm is real (if any), but be sure to check the lighting--I think it would be much more of a silhouette in this case.
Overall, 5/10 as it is. Excellent idea and could be great if fleshed out a bit. Keep working.
Originally Posted by WOLFBIKER
8/10 Really good shot. Great action. I just wish it wasn't so soft. :/
Good catch. That's my fault in post. Still trying to nail down the finer points in LR.
Here's another from that game.