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Old 09-13-2011, 03:08 PM #1
Bluewolf
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Script feedback

Hey all! I don't normally come into the Literature subforum. I mostly post in the photography section, but this seemed more appropriate here.

I'm in an independent film class, and I'm required to write, shoot, and edit a 10-20 minute short film. I just finished my script, and I'm looking for feedback. One of the things I like about the photography subforum is that they don't sugar coat their opinions. I was hoping that I could get some honest feedback here as well.

I'm less concerned with formatting errors, since I'm going to be the one producing this, and more concerned with the story. Feel free to tear it apart. I'm pretty aware already that it isn't great, but I'd like some direction in how to make it better.

Thanks in advance!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1782247/The%20Deal.pdf - you can download it here.
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