Originally Posted by Ultiplaya11
listen to my song!
Finally got to it!
Typing as I listen...
PROGRAM SOME DRUMS
I do like what you have going on, but the two parts are too polar. Mix them more tastefully. And separate the tonalities a bit more.
The two parts you have at about 1:00 are mixed improperly. Funny enough, the lead needs to be dragged back. I would say, if you have the time, get two tracks (same riffs, same tone, different recordings) for the backing track. Mix them 90% left and 90% right. Then take your lead part and center it completely. It's going to add a LOT of depth to that and make it a lot more badass sounding.
Overall, it sounds bad ****ing ***, dude. I like it a lot. Unfortunately, a LOT of the overall presentation is done from mixing and mastering. If you have Skype or something, we should get together and I'll share some plugins and/or ideas with ya. I love it though. Awesome ****.
Completely apart from anything here... I've become a huge Norah Jones fan.