First and foremost, the netting is in the wrong location. When you use a ghillie, what do you do, crawl, right? The burlap strips should be on the back, on the front you should reinforce it for crawling.
Do a google search and your answer will be there.
I have made several ghillies in my time and I will no longer make them, not for this sport.
Remember this... "We quell the storm, and ride the thunder!"
after you move the jute to the back of the suit, look at the area you'll be playing most. Look at the undergrowth. That's what you want to match. You don't want to be standing up and blend in, you want to tie in some foilage from the area and blend in when you're prone. you want to match what's under that foilage.
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