First and foremost, the netting is in the wrong location. When you use a ghillie, what do you do, crawl, right? The burlap strips should be on the back, on the front you should reinforce it for crawling.
Do a google search and your answer will be there.
I have made several ghillies in my time and I will no longer make them, not for this sport.
Remember this... "We quell the storm, and ride the thunder!"