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Old 04-24-2009, 11:44 AM #1177
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Old 04-24-2009, 12:51 PM #1178
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eh 3.5/10 not really sure what to make of it
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Old 04-24-2009, 02:25 PM #1179
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tips on what i could do to improve please
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Old 04-24-2009, 02:53 PM #1180
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tips on what i could do to improve please
you can improve your spelling.
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Old 04-24-2009, 03:47 PM #1181
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you can improve your spelling.
lol, and lose the cursive on the top. very hard to read
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Old 04-24-2009, 04:01 PM #1182
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yes i know i cant spell, and that is the team name and how we write it, thats why i have it up there, but other then the spelling thing lol
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Old 04-24-2009, 05:53 PM #1183
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yes i know i cant spell, and that is the team name and how we write it, thats why i have it up there, but other then the spelling thing lol
well for one: typography is one of the most important things to learn. Yours is lacking severely, pick a curisive that is legible, and dont capitalize all the letters....that defeats the whole purpose of cursive.

Secondly theres really nothing to critique, you did a simple desaturation, cropped out a small area and added some text. Considering the text was hard to read id give the whole piece a 3/10 simply because its not an eyesore.

Sorry to be harsh but your not going to learn anything if i just say "looks good 8/10"

(ill find something to post so this isnt a text post)

edit: heres some random thing i did as a background
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Old 04-24-2009, 06:00 PM #1184
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thank you man, would you be willing to teach me how to do things that are appealing, i tried the toturials but they dont help

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Old 04-24-2009, 07:11 PM #1185
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Im not sure if i could teach you because its just learning from experience but have you tried the site: www.pixel2life.com? its a great place to get started. Just keep on working on the tutorials and the more you do them the more you get used to using photoshop and varying your designs.
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Old 04-25-2009, 10:51 AM #1186
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to pinky:
you could probably blur the background a bit behind the guy. its a bit distracting and takes away from the subject. it may also help ur text pop out.
just a suggestion
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Old 04-25-2009, 03:39 PM #1187
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ok, now stupid question, how do i do that, please PM me lol

and so this isnt a text post
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Old 04-27-2009, 04:26 PM #1188
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5/10 its looks decent but takes really no effort.

Heres my iphone i made in illustrator, i was bored and just looked at it and made it as i went along.

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Old 04-27-2009, 05:29 PM #1189
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it might be the reflection but it looks the the speaker is offcenter

other than that it's nice (you forgot the buttons on the side)
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Old 04-27-2009, 08:22 PM #1190
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Old 04-28-2009, 02:02 AM #1191
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Old 04-28-2009, 08:48 PM #1192
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Just made a simple nice wallpaper for my laptop, using all stock items in photoshop.


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Old 04-30-2009, 04:19 AM #1193
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looks nice, well executed, but nothing new. 7/10
(also i dont think the little stars should continue into the stroke of the larger one, just the fill imho)

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...all i seem to be asked to do is skulls or shields, oh wells.

Drew the skull, scanned it in then traced it with the pen tool in illustrator.
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Old 04-30-2009, 11:37 AM #1194
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Skulls, swirls, starbursts, rising suns, splatter, guns and brass knuckles are why I'm trying to get away from paintball clients

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Old 05-05-2009, 12:42 PM #1195
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Nothing short of amazing, as usual.
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Old 05-06-2009, 04:12 PM #1196
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looks great. very simple 8/10

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Old 05-11-2009, 01:10 AM #1197
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Awesome!! do you have a link to a tut for the broken glass technique? I've always wanted to try something with that.
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Anyways, I just did some pro-bono work. My mom is a teacher all into politics so I did this for her.

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