While I do love the composition and everything, i've seen teh same shot about 7 gajillion times >< the OT opening screen was like that, the shot that was int he school mag was like that... it's just stale after a while. Like sunsets... a sunset is a sunset is a sunset after you see enough of them. Try to mix it up a little, experiment with it some more and see what happens. Love the concept though
When I've got my portfolio home I'll post up teh coke series.