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Old 05-16-2005, 11:42 AM #1
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Er...Some photo's(-graphy sounds pretentious)

Yeah I'm taking photography for my a-levels, and I managed to get some bits and pieces off the mac and onto my pc. Just wondered what you thought, yes I know theres scratches and whatnot but I'm not very good at developing film
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Old 05-16-2005, 06:34 PM #2
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I'm no critic, but I think you need to pull back a little on the subjects. (So you can see the whole thing.)
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first and last are decent, but the second one is out of focus and the third one just lacks composition
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first and last are decent, but the second one is out of focus and the third one just lacks composition
Yes I agree the 3RD one is definitely the weakest, I should've swopped it for a different shot. However, the streetlight is out of focus on the second one, and as I had little light I had to try and use as much aperture as possible, I could only get a focus on the building behind

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I'm no critic, but I think you need to pull back a little on the subjects. (So you can see the whole thing.)
No way. If he was using a 4x5 view camera, then maybe, but using the format that he is using, he SHOULD be getting closer to really focus on abstracting the elements and creating a design based photograph. If he backed up, then the photo would be just a picture of a building, and not talk about the spacial relationships of the negative space the sky creates with the line and form of the buildings.

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I ****ing suck at pictars.
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No way. If he was using a 4x5 view camera, then maybe, but using the format that he is using, he SHOULD be getting closer to really focus on abstracting the elements and creating a design based photograph. If he backed up, then the photo would be just a picture of a building, and not talk about the spacial relationships of the negative space the sky creates with the line and form of the buildings.

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Thanks Mike, I was really starting to look more at the composition in my viewfinder than just random jazz, and thats what I;m trying to develop.

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I really like your railing picture.
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I don't like it.
Ok, er thanks?

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I really like your railing picture.
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Old 05-30-2005, 06:44 AM #11
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And this from a gig the other night.







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I think you splooged on the third one.... I guess you really thought that girl was hot

Oh and that railing shot makes me think of a nike commercial. For what it's worth. I like it. Your shots are nice.
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I think you splooged on the third one.... I guess you really thought that girl was hot

Oh and that railing shot makes me think of a nike commercial. For what it's worth. I like it. Your shots are nice.
Well she aint that bad to look at you know, but I did develop these myself so gimme some credit

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Old 06-01-2005, 04:31 PM #15
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More of the same.



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