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05-16-2005, 11:42 AM
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Everyday Junglist
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: birmingham uk
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Er...Some photo's(-graphy sounds pretentious)
Yeah I'm taking photography for my a-levels, and I managed to get some bits and pieces off the mac and onto my pc. Just wondered what you thought, yes I know theres scratches and whatnot but I'm not very good at developing film 
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Last edited by joolux : 05-27-2005 at 08:58 AM.
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05-16-2005, 06:34 PM
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Sarcasm Sandwich
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Central Florida
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I'm no critic, but I think you need to pull back a little on the subjects. (So you can see the whole thing.)
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05-16-2005, 09:12 PM
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: Greeley, CO
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first and last are decent, but the second one is out of focus and the third one just lacks composition
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05-17-2005, 11:29 AM
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Everyday Junglist
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Quote:
Originally posted by nonamehick
first and last are decent, but the second one is out of focus and the third one just lacks composition
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Yes I agree the 3RD one is definitely the weakest, I should've swopped it for a different shot. However, the streetlight is out of focus on the second one, and as I had little light I had to try and use as much aperture as possible, I could only get a focus on the building behind 
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05-17-2005, 12:03 PM
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National Sales Mgr @ Raza
Join Date: Mar 2004
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Quote:
Originally posted by The_Kids_Are_Alright
I'm no critic, but I think you need to pull back a little on the subjects. (So you can see the whole thing.)
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No way. If he was using a 4x5 view camera, then maybe, but using the format that he is using, he SHOULD be getting closer to really focus on abstracting the elements and creating a design based photograph. If he backed up, then the photo would be just a picture of a building, and not talk about the spacial relationships of the negative space the sky creates with the line and form of the buildings.
Good work Tom!!!
 
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05-17-2005, 05:01 PM
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Sarcasm Sandwich
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Central Florida
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I ****ing suck at pictars. |
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05-17-2005, 05:34 PM
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Everyday Junglist
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: birmingham uk
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Quote:
Originally posted by Deimus85
No way. If he was using a 4x5 view camera, then maybe, but using the format that he is using, he SHOULD be getting closer to really focus on abstracting the elements and creating a design based photograph. If he backed up, then the photo would be just a picture of a building, and not talk about the spacial relationships of the negative space the sky creates with the line and form of the buildings.
Good work Tom!!!
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Thanks Mike, I was really starting to look more at the composition in my viewfinder than just random jazz, and thats what I;m trying to develop.
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05-18-2005, 08:11 PM
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Can't is the cancer of...
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I don't like it.
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05-18-2005, 08:20 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: St. Louis, Missouri
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I really like your railing picture.
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05-19-2005, 10:48 AM
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Originally posted by P8ntball_89
I don't like it.
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Ok, er thanks?
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I really like your railing picture.
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Thank you!
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05-30-2005, 06:44 AM
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05-30-2005, 04:31 PM
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National Sales Mgr @ Raza
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Nice concert shots!!!!
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05-30-2005, 05:46 PM
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I think you splooged on the third one.... I guess you really thought that girl was hot 
Oh and that railing shot makes me think of a nike commercial. For what it's worth. I like it. Your shots are nice. |
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05-31-2005, 04:59 AM
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Quote:
Originally posted by what a thing
I think you splooged on the third one.... I guess you really thought that girl was hot
Oh and that railing shot makes me think of a nike commercial. For what it's worth. I like it. Your shots are nice.
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Well she aint that bad to look at you know, but I did develop these myself so gimme some credit
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06-01-2005, 04:31 PM
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Everyday Junglist
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More of the same.
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