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12-08-2012, 11:03 PM
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The lack of any detail in her hair in the 2nd shot bugs me, but the composition is definitely solid on both.
Only thing I'd really have suggested was bumping the exposure on the 2nd image a bit and dropping the blacks to bring up the detail in her hair.
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12-08-2012, 11:06 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by LastarsonisT
The lack of any detail in her hair in the 2nd shot bugs me, but the composition is definitely solid on both.
Only thing I'd really have suggested was bumping the exposure on the 2nd image a bit and dropping the blacks to bring up the detail in her hair.
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I definitely agree. If I brought up the exposure, it brought out my **** background though, I had to compromise 
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12-08-2012, 11:09 PM
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Not sure what you're using to edit right now, but you could bump the exposure for the image then use the brush to paint the background down a bit assuming you're in Lightroom.
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12-09-2012, 07:29 AM
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Not sure what you're using to edit right now, but you could bump the exposure for the image then use the brush to paint the background down a bit assuming you're in Lightroom.
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PS CS5, but I've had zero formal training so I blow.
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12-09-2012, 10:01 PM
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12-09-2012, 10:46 PM
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12-11-2012, 09:21 AM
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12-11-2012, 10:17 AM
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12-11-2012, 11:50 AM
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Diggin it, maybe wouldve did a longer exposure to get a more natural lighting on the storefront while getting more stars? Digging it as is though.
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12-11-2012, 02:30 PM
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Its a stack of 110 30sec exposures.
the store is lit on a separate shot with a flashlight... I would have done longer but it got interrupted\ruined by a drug deal and I didn't want to waste my time... haha
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12-12-2012, 10:30 AM
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Its a stack of 110 30sec exposures.
the store is lit on a separate shot with a flashlight... I would have done longer but it got interrupted\ruined by a drug deal and I didn't want to waste my time... haha
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Fair enough, theres bound to be something that freaks you out when going out on these kinds of excursions... something about waiting on the camera sets me on extra high alert. What kind of aperature were you using, just curious.
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12-12-2012, 10:34 AM
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Quote:
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Its a stack of 110 30sec exposures.
the store is lit on a separate shot with a flashlight... I would have done longer but it got interrupted\ruined by a drug deal and I didn't want to waste my time... haha
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12-12-2012, 11:38 AM
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a bro job..
wait, that's not even a drug?
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12-12-2012, 11:41 AM
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it could pay for them though....
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12-12-2012, 11:46 AM
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I didn't buy anything.... I make sure all my drug deals don't interfere with my shoots. thats just silly.
But yeah, when I was sitting next to the camera, I was worried about everything... then the car rolled up and I thought I was getting a ticket or something. Then, I thought about being in the middle of nowhere on indian land.... I'M GETTING ROBBED.... I shut my door and locked that ****. haha
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12-12-2012, 10:39 PM
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12-14-2012, 10:06 PM
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12-14-2012, 11:33 PM
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12-15-2012, 02:49 AM
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