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Old 02-23-2009, 02:05 PM #1072
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I like it. everything blends nicely.
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Old 02-23-2009, 02:29 PM #1073
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I like it. everything blends nicely.
Could you post an image please?

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Old 02-23-2009, 02:35 PM #1074
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Could you post an image please?

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Isnt that a little hypocritical considering you didnt post a picture either.

Anyways heres a logo i made for someone in the free thread.


o btw 7/10 for the picture above, simple yet clean. I just dont like filters that much so im being biased
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Old 02-23-2009, 02:43 PM #1075
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Isnt that a little hypocritical considering you didnt post a picture either.

Anyways heres a logo i made for someone in the free thread.


o btw 7/10 for the picture above, simple yet clean. I just dont like filters that much so im being biased
You've got mad talent racer, 9/10. The gun needs cleaned up a little, that's all.

Sticker design I made for someone.
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Old 02-23-2009, 03:03 PM #1076
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Isnt that a little hypocritical considering you didnt post a picture either.

Anyways heres a logo i made for someone in the free thread.

[IM G]http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k208/rracer11/bodycount.png[/IMG]
o btw 7/10 for the picture above, simple yet clean. I just dont like filters that much so im being biased
thanks.
i think im a bit different, i dont mind filters, as long as they arent over done.
i wouldve tried to do something else, but im honestly running out of creative ideas to do with PS, lol.
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Old 02-23-2009, 10:39 PM #1077
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Made this for my girlfriend.

PS and paper and ink.



Jonzed- not sure what you are going for but i don't dig brass knuckles on any thing and I don't really like the font either. It looks like you made it for someone so I hope they like it. It's just not my style.
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Old 02-24-2009, 08:20 AM #1078
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Faces seem a bit choppy, but it looks like thats what the theme is. Pretty cool, how'd she like it? 8/10


Another shirt I made when I got bored in graphics class.

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Old 02-24-2009, 10:41 AM #1079
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8/10, i like it.
was any of it hand drawn? or is it all PS?


heres a simple logo i made, this is more for a question than anything-
can anyone help me understand why some lines become pixelated?(like on the back of the P, in KPS) im working at a resolution of 200 pixels per inch i believe, does that have something to do with it?
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Old 02-24-2009, 10:50 AM #1080
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5/10...its nice, its just SO simple


picture i just did of me cause i was bored at work...i dont think this is great by any means, just something i did


and a revised version
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Old 02-24-2009, 11:52 AM #1081
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idk 5/10?
i got bored while the power went out..made this:
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Old 02-25-2009, 11:56 AM #1082
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Nice. I like the text treatment, the D3 X-Ball part doesn't blend well for a sub element but it probably doesn't matter if this isn't made for anything other than anti-boredom. 6.5/10

Here is something I've been working on, new layout for an existing site.
The text isn't really set yet, what is placed is just for positioning. I feel like it needs more contrast, the blacks need to be darker. I'm looking for constructive critisism not "dude that is So crappy buhahaha"
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the only thing i dont love about the website is the blobs/splatter in the top left..otherwise, i like it alot

8/10
Thanks Eastside, I agree, it doesn't really fit but unfortunately that is their logo. (Unless you meant the black splatter on the background layer, it does look out of place.
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Old 02-25-2009, 12:05 PM #1083
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the only thing i dont love about the website is the blobs/splatter in the top left..otherwise, i like it alot

8/10
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Old 02-25-2009, 12:42 PM #1084
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Nice. I like the text treatment, the D3 X-Ball part doesn't blend well for a sub element but it probably doesn't matter if this isn't made for anything other than anti-boredom. 6.5/10

Here is something I've been working on, new layout for an existing site.
The text isn't really set yet, what is placed is just for positioning. I feel like it needs more contrast, the blacks need to be darker. I'm looking for constructive critisism not "dude that is So crappy buhahaha"
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http://www.mainstreampb.com/MSPBtest.jpg
Definitely not bad at all. I'd actually keep the dark grey.. I like to avoid using absolute colors (white, black, red, blue, yellow).

I would left or right justify the content on the right, centering doesn't create strong alignment.

I know your typography isn't finalized, but if you wanted to use text links for the navigation you'll need a web safe font. If you wanted to use images, I'd make better use of them by using a creative navigation that require images (text links > image links for search engine purposes, but usability > SEO, so if you can make a navigation that increases usability more than it decreases SEO, go for it).

For the content containers on the left, try playing around with some transparency rather than solid black (kind of like you did on the transparency gradient, only solid transparency).

Is this going to be like a web-based advertisement or a full blown website? If there is going to be content, you'll have to consider where you're going to put that.

You'll probably also want to avoid the 'click for details' text link, as search engines won't like that quite as much as something more in context (like say, 'May 2nd event details').


Sorry for the non-image post, but I wanted to comment on this and didn't have any new work I wanted to post.
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Nice. I like the text treatment, the D3 X-Ball part doesn't blend well for a sub element but it probably doesn't matter if this isn't made for anything other than anti-boredom. 6.5/10

Here is something I've been working on, new layout for an existing site.
The text isn't really set yet, what is placed is just for positioning. I feel like it needs more contrast, the blacks need to be darker. I'm looking for constructive critisism not "dude that is So crappy buhahaha"
Large jpg so the pic is under the cut.
http://www.mainstreampb.com/MSPBtest.jpg



Thanks Eastside, I agree, it doesn't really fit but unfortunately that is their logo. (Unless you meant the black splatter on the background layer, it does look out of place.
9/10. It looks very good and clean.


I was bored...


Guys, please stop with the text posts...

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Old 02-26-2009, 09:43 AM #1086
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Not bad,
7/10.

Some of you guys might have seen the post a few pages back. This is close to my final design:

Any suggestions? This is my first Logo using Illustrator, and I'm also playing with the tag line "Growing you a better future"


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Damn, what ever happened to image hosts these days? They just destroy the images
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Old 02-26-2009, 12:10 PM #1087
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I don't like the separation of the orange and brown, I feel like the two brown parts (county, foundation) should be down at the bottom together, and the two orange parts (flagler, education) should be together at the top. I first read 'Flagler Education', then look on to the 'County Foundation', then figure out that it's supposed to be 'Flagler County Education Foundation'. In order to fix that you'd have to make the 'County' the bold orange and the 'Education' the small brown.

It's all objective, of course, but that's how my brain interprets it.

Shirt design I did for the paintball club here at MTU:

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Old 02-26-2009, 12:33 PM #1088
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8/10

I'm not a fan of the center text but the rest looks really good
Logo I made for someone. (he picked the text)
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i like the tree alot, i just dont thik the font and the tree go together..i know he picked the font,but it doesnt flow


this is just something dumb i was playing around with...not a serious design or anything
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Old 02-26-2009, 12:57 PM #1090
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The background doesn't really make sense and I'd leave out the rest of the white that's not outlining.
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Old 03-02-2009, 01:51 AM #1091
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It's alright.. your dime a dozen paintball logo, but I'm sure they'll like it

Just got Illustrator and a tablet, been 'painting' this:



~4 hours invested so far, but it's really teaching me how to use the tablet which is the overall goal.
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It's alright.. your dime a dozen paintball logo, but I'm sure they'll like it

Just got Illustrator and a tablet, been 'painting' this:



~4 hours invested so far, but it's really teaching me how to use the tablet which is the overall goal.
You didn't actually rate it....
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