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Old 11-20-2012, 07:06 PM #106
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Decent shot, but the horizon is off. 6/10


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Old 11-21-2012, 08:43 PM #107
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7.5/10 it's a bit too cold. warmen it up some!

cleaned up my car a little bit today.

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Old 11-21-2012, 09:01 PM #108
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7.5/10 it's a bit too cold. warmen it up some!

cleaned up my car a little bit today.

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More perfection. 10/10

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Old 11-22-2012, 10:47 PM #109
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Like the photo! Only gripe I would have is the pole growing out of the cars left side. 9/10

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Old 11-24-2012, 12:15 PM #110
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8.5/10, I like the angle.

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Old 11-24-2012, 04:44 PM #111
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4/10 Bad angle, bad crop, too soft. Sorry for bashing, hahah. Try some different angles and back up a little bit.

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Old 11-27-2012, 07:38 AM #112
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5/10 good dof but boring subject and background.
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Old 11-27-2012, 09:25 AM #113
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6/10 nice picture but the foreground is distracting me quite a bit. I would try and play around with different crops and see how it looks.

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Old 11-27-2012, 12:10 PM #114
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I like the concept, but the shirt design is too busy for me. I know this isn't your fault. Also the shadow of the shirt below her hand at the top looks overprocessed. Unless its just a weirdly designed shirt. 7.5/10[IMG][/IMG]

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Old 11-27-2012, 04:20 PM #115
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8.5/10 Very interesting.



This shot is only framed. I didn't do anything to adjust it after I took this shot.
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Old 11-27-2012, 04:36 PM #116
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I really like it. 8/10.
I would had framed the bottom part a little bit different tho.

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Old 11-27-2012, 06:53 PM #117
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I'm just starting out in terms of photography but I have to say 7/10 just because the rope lights on the tree and the streetlight on the right kind of split the area where your eyes initially fall on the picture.

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Old 11-28-2012, 08:56 AM #118
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4/10 I do not like the crop at all.
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Old 11-28-2012, 09:12 AM #119
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pretty cool picture, and the B&W conversion works well, I like it.. however, the amount of space at the bottom realllly bothers me, idk why... I assume you were trying to get the entire reflection in the composition, but I feel like it's just too much dead space... 7.5/10

edit: I tried cropping it, however, i didn't like my own crop haha... it's just something about the bottom space that bothers me

and my image: I traveled to Ghana this summer for a humanitarian trip for one month, to help teach English and other subjects in school... The country is incredibly poor and their school buildings/supplies are very minimal, however, the people were so incredibly happy... they were happier with what little they had than most americans who have everything:
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Old 11-28-2012, 11:48 AM #120
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Wow, that picture made me smile. Although the picture would be better if there wasn't people in the background, still great work.. great story. I love what you did here and I wish i had an oppurtunity to go there. 10/10. [IMG][/IMG]
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Old 11-28-2012, 01:57 PM #121
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I like the angle and the way the brighter colors of the bunkers in the back contrast with the neutral colors he's wearing
The only thing that gets me is how his arm and his leg are cut off

8/10

I'm pretty sure I overexposed the sky on this one. Like I said, I'm new to this.
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Old 11-28-2012, 02:14 PM #122
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6/10... idk what it is but the picture seems noisy/grainy or dirty... I would also prefer a straight horizon, and the sky is blown out... a tighter crop would help too I think... hope you dont mind a quick re-edit:


and my picture: like previously stated about my trip to ghana, the schools were very poor and did not have much money for improvements in building structure or desks or chairs... here is a shot of the classroom that I taught in each day... when it rained, you would constantly hear the rain splashing off the tin roof, and would sometimes splash inside from the lack of walls:
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Old 11-28-2012, 04:48 PM #123
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6/10... idk what it is but the picture seems noisy/grainy or dirty... I would also prefer a straight horizon, and the sky is blown out... a tighter crop would help too I think... hope you dont mind a quick re-edit:
I don't mind at all. I love constructive criticism, anything to help me get better. I think the noise could have partially been caused by my iso or because there was dust coating my camera because of all the sliding people were doing next to me in those doritos.
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Old 11-29-2012, 03:16 PM #124
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Another nice picture, but i dont think the vignette does it justice. Also think it would be pretty cool if he was close to the building and his legs where in the picture. 8/10

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Old 11-29-2012, 04:20 PM #125
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7/10
what'd you do in terms of processing?


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Old 11-29-2012, 05:39 PM #126
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[quote=skwirnmn;77379561]7/10
what'd you do in terms of processing?

Just added a little clarity and darkened shadows a little bit.
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