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Old 11-13-2012, 08:12 PM #85
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5/10 everything around him is in focus, except for him. Also not fond of the crop.

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Old 11-14-2012, 01:26 AM #86
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6/10 Clean shot, i think the heavy vignette doesnt do it any justice, not so much next time maybe

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Old 11-14-2012, 12:15 PM #87
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7/10 - Seems like the lens flare may be a bit much or maybe the contrast needs adjusted.

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Old 11-14-2012, 01:56 PM #88
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Tipsay- The lens flare is fine, it works. I would have liked to see it a bit more overexposed, but that's me. And it appears you focused on her scarf/dress, which is good yet bad. Good because it shows you're using your center focus point but bad because you didn't focus on her face, then recompose.

haywoodeee- Technically speaking, the photos alright. Viewing it in it's larger versions on Flickr shows that it's out of focus, and it's over sharpened. Content wise, it's a dog. Yes I understand, it's your dog which makes it important to you, but yeah. I give it a 4/10.

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Old 11-14-2012, 04:56 PM #89
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hmm.. its a super clean shot, looks to be a tad wet which i dig for some of the contrast and texture, but the location just stinks... the trees and plants growing out of the car kinda ruin it a little... i know its in the middle of the street tho, not something you can control... 6/10 dope car

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Old 11-14-2012, 04:58 PM #90
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8/10. The people gawking are distracting (not your fault), as is that half a tree on the left and the sign that looks like a super size cup sitting on the roof.



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Old 11-14-2012, 05:11 PM #91
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hmm.. its a super clean shot, looks to be a tad wet which i dig for some of the contrast and texture, but the location just stinks... the trees and plants growing out of the car kinda ruin it a little... i know its in the middle of the street tho, not something you can control... 6/10 dope car

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Old 11-14-2012, 05:31 PM #92
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Mosh: there's no main focal point. ok, we get it, it's a Veyron. but your eye needs something to be attracted to. 4/10


igotbanned: i feel as if there needs to be more to it. for example, what is she looking at? 6/10

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Old 11-14-2012, 07:45 PM #93
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youve got really good car shots, but not feelin this one, to much gray, looks like a poorly developed film print 4/10


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Old 11-14-2012, 07:50 PM #94
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Dave, that is ****ing beautiful. 10/10

One from a recent maternity shoot i did.


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Old 11-14-2012, 09:09 PM #95
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7/10 The flare is distracting to me but clean cute photo. maybe try toning down the washed out sky a bit, but good photo none the less.

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Old 11-14-2012, 09:49 PM #96
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4/10 Just not really feelin it. Nothing super interesting to me.

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Old 11-14-2012, 10:07 PM #97
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4/10 Just not really feelin it. Nothing super interesting to me.

I really like the way the car sharply contrasts with the fall colors and overcast sky. It really pops out at you. Though I think it's a really nice photo, it didn't quite take my breath away, so I'll give it an 8/10.

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Old 11-17-2012, 08:16 PM #98
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7/10. I don't have much to say.

Here is brooklyn again. a little vibrancy adjustment.

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Old 11-18-2012, 02:55 PM #99
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2/10 - half his/her face is black, you focused on his butt, try to set up the scene, its just a snap shot of your dog chillin. Colors/vibrance are okay

dont remember if i posted this one, inside NCARs C130 (National Center for Atmospheric Research)

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Old 11-18-2012, 02:58 PM #100
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i've always loved aircraft cockpit shots. nice, clean, simple. very nice 9.5/10


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Old 11-18-2012, 08:10 PM #101
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7.5 Not like I know anything about photography, just don't like the shot. Took this today, first try with my t2i. R/C jet.

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Old 11-20-2012, 01:07 AM #102
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6/10 clouds look funny and tight crop on the right side

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Old 11-20-2012, 11:46 AM #103
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I like planes. 9/10.

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Old 11-20-2012, 01:55 PM #104
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I think that you're supposed to base the rating off of the quality of the photograph, not on if you like the subject or not. It originally frustrated me on post #83 where I just got a score and in #98 where you just said "I dont have much to say". I just want to improve. For instance, on your picture, I would rate it a 6.5/10, because I am unsure what you're focusing on. If it is supposed to be her eye, which seems like a popular focal point for most animals, then maybe crop in a little so its just his / her face in the picture. If it was supposed to be the entire dog, maybe back up and zoom out some, and get a little deeper depth of field so its all in focus. Good looking pooch tho!

Just to stay on topic...


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Old 11-20-2012, 04:10 PM #105
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I think that you're supposed to base the rating off of the quality of the photograph, not on if you like the subject or not. It originally frustrated me on post #83 where I just got a score. I just want to improve. For instance, on your picture, I would rate it a 6.5/10, because I am unsure what you're focusing on. If it is supposed to be her eye, which seems like a popular focal point for most animals, then maybe crop in a little so its just his / her face in the picture. If it was supposed to be the entire dog, maybe back up and zoom out some, and get a little deeper depth of field so its all in focus. Good looking pooch tho!

Just to stay on topic...

9.5/10

I don't know what you are focusing on, but that is freaking gorgeous. I love the how all the colors come together, yet there is the contrast of texture between the water and clouds.

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