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Old 11-17-2010, 01:15 PM #148
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aa, i think a quote from my chum frank o'hara will serve you well, "i don't believe in god, so i don't have to make elaborately sounded structures."

even the deepest lake must have a surface on which one can swim. you'll eventually get some divers, and maybe even those recreational swimmers will start going deeper. still, you must always provide that surface
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Old 12-01-2010, 04:31 AM #149
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I dun got my heartbroked I've never been inspired to write poetry, I'm a fan of prose instead. But last night this just came to me, even as elementary as it may be.

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You had me all along.
It was easy and quite simply,
all you had to do was say you loved me.

It was a simple deed, though never achieved.
If only you'd stop crawling on your hands and knees.
Try standing on your own, your own two feet.
Just stand with me now, toe to toe.
Forget the past.. lets just go.

Where we are going, neither of us knows.
Its an adventure, a journey
A journey which will last all of eternity.

With you you by my side, and I by yours,
This journey will last.
Through thick and thin, happy and sad,
I see us together at the very end.
For thats the way the die have been cast.

No amount of time can stop
this feeling, I know its true:
That my dearest <Girl>, I love you.
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Old 12-02-2010, 08:13 AM #150
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needs moar amog

do you want serious input or not?
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The geometry of innocent flesh on the bone
Causes Galileo's math book to get thrown
At Delilah, who sits worthlessly alone,
But the tears on her cheeks are from laughter.
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Old 02-18-2011, 04:10 PM #151
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I dun got my heartbroked I've never been inspired to write poetry, I'm a fan of prose instead. But last night this just came to me, even as elementary as it may be.

-------

You had me all along.
It was easy and quite simply,
all you had to do was say you loved me.

It was a simple deed, though never achieved.
If only you'd stop crawling on your hands and knees.
Try standing on your own, your own two feet.
Just stand with me now, toe to toe.
Forget the past.. lets just go.

Where we are going, neither of us knows.
Its an adventure, a journey
A journey which will last all of eternity.

With you you by my side, and I by yours,
This journey will last.
Through thick and thin, happy and sad,
I see us together at the very end.
For thats the way the die have been cast.

No amount of time can stop
this feeling, I know its true:
That my dearest <Girl>, I love you.
When I was broken and felt so far away,
You were there with arms wide open,
Putting the pieces back into place.
I thought all my doors were locked,
And I'd thrown away the key,
But letting you in came so naturally.
When I was so low you turned ice into snow,
The feel of your skin and the smell of your hair
Gave me a sense of vertigo.
When your with me
Its everything I want it to be,
And I don't care about any other fish in the sea.
With you the sky turns green and the grass seems blue,
The night looks brighter,
And the rough feels smooth.
Because you can make my tears disappear
Quicker than a hit from the bong,
Or a bottle of beer.
Just thinking about you on those dark and lonely nights,
Gets me feeling all shook up,
And I know every little thing is gonna be alright.
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Old 02-27-2011, 12:48 PM #152
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Driving around all day for work got my mind racing again yesterday...

Have you ever had a problem in life you thought you'd never see through?
Everyone has an issue,
maybe one or two.
But that doesn't matter,
the only thing that does is you,
if you can suck it all up and admit the truth.
I know what it means to be there,
I've already taken a walk in those shoes.
You see all my life I've been persecuted for what I've done,
So much so I stopped trying to have any fun.
Put my dreams aside,
forgot about everything I loved,
because when I saw someone in need,
I'd drop everything to give 'em a hug.
And for the most part that hasn't changed,
that's just who I am and I ain't ashamed.
But what did change was the reason why.
It was the first time I saw a grown man cry,
and that day is forever engraved in my mind.
I came home from school and didn't notice everyone in the livingroom,
Didn't expect what was coming or prepared for the impending doom.
Went to put my backpack away just like any other day,
then I heard my grandma crying from across the way.
I tried to ask why,
but she said go talk to your dad,
So I went to the livingroom and there he sat,
propped against the couch with a look so sad,
I couldn't describe it even if I tried,
and thats when he told me any day he could die.
Now to some people it may not come as a shock,
but with those few words my foundations were rocked.
For once in my life I had nothing to say,
just sat in my room and stared into space.
Until he came and sat on the bed,
trying to find words but nothing was said.
When he finally spoke there were tears in his eyes,
and then he started to apologize,
for everything wrong he did in my life.
And what came next I couldn't believe,
I broke down and forgave him for everything he'd done to me.
All the missed birthdays and little league
games he promised he'd come see.
I didn't realize it then but now I can see,
that day to me was an epiphany.
What would you do when all you hate
is crying on your shoulder and asking to be forgave?
For me, I questioned my existance.
What life lesson did I learn from this instance?
All my life I blamed this man,
for everything that happened to me,
whether it be random or planned.
But now theres no one to blame,
just me and my own shame.
What I'm really trying to say
is lifes too short to spend it full of anger and hate.
Stop thinking about what you can't control,
because all it does it multiply your troubles a hundred fold.
Accept the reality,
don't deny the truth.
Because in the end the only person your fooling is you.
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Old 02-28-2011, 10:10 PM #153
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HERES A POEM I HEARD TODAY IDK FROM WHO I GOT I IN A FWD TEXT
**** Me

Roses are red, lemons are sour, open your legs and give me an hour. Kissing is a habit, ****ing is a game, guys get all the pleasure, girls get all the pain. Ten minutes of pleasure, nine months of pain, three days in the hospital, a baby with no name. The baby is a bastard, the mother is a whore, this never would have happened if the rubber hadn't tore. Sex is like math: You subtract the clothes, add the bed, divide the legs and pray to God you don't multiply. Roses are fine, i'll be the six if you'll be the nine, eat me, beat me, bite me, blow me, **** me, suck me very slowly. If you like it, don't be sassy, use your tongue and make it nasty.
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Old 04-07-2011, 02:50 PM #154
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A curious, fleeting feeling.
One cannot quite describe.
A cloud of perfume in your head,
Swirling round all your thoughts,
Cloudy, but oh so clear,
"That I must have you my dear."
A queezy feeling, exchanging names,
Sweating palms, with a shaking voice.
The first seed is planted,
The growth has begun.
Days to weeks, to months, to years,
Everything sprouts up under the sun.
By now thoughts turn to fears,
The perfume is poison,
Dreams lead to nightmares,
Your thoughts are a cage,
Trapped in within rage,
With venomous words,
Tear down what you built.
The plant seeded long ago,
Stands now as a torch.
But out of its ashes new feelings will rise,
Like the valiant pheonix,
Love never dies.

The Great Society

Out in the streets a child cries with sickness,
Mother isn't there,
She just doen't seem to care.
Fathers non-existant,
Doing his latest stint.
So cries fall on cold pavement,
Another casualty of The Great Society.
"Served" by politicians,
Whose children laugh and play,
Knowing nothing of what happens day to day.
But they say ignorance is bliss,
So do your best to keep your eyes shut
Or perhaps if you really care,
Open them up and stare.

super anxious about throwing these up here but ya gotta do it sometime i suppose
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Old 02-29-2012, 08:05 PM #155
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Fleeting thoughts on a minuscule scale,
Whose humble revelations make even great calculations pale.
Take the comforting scraps of safety you had
and cast it to the sea like Homer's Iliad,

Little scrap of poetry I mustered up.
I hope to contribute more later.
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Old 04-25-2012, 08:04 AM #156
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There is some excellent poetry in here. Any Walt Whitman fans?

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Old 05-18-2012, 12:26 AM #157
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Poem my great grandfather wrote after WWI

Somewhere birds are singing
In the meadows and in the trees
Somewhere bells are ringing
And children playing in the leaves

But Here I lay my breath slow
Amongst the mud and in the snow
Dreaming of Somewhere far away
Where lovers lay as eyes align
As I dream of some other day
Watching the moon slowly rise

Somewhere old men sit silent
Pondering in there dens
Poisoned from what they’ve seen
As they watch another passing year
But that’s far, far away from here

What it is I could never see
For in the wood of some foreign land
I hold my head down in fear
As I wait for death to find me here
And take me down to his valley

Up the Hill
The whistle blows
On into the steep

For in the wood of some foreign land
With rifle and bayonet in hand
Up the Hill I go
And think of somewhere my heart is near
But that’s far, far away from here
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