Originally Posted by bballfreak0587
what would make it a 10?
First and foremost, please don't text post here.
By most peoples standards 10/10 would be unattainable for this, not because it's not good but because it isn't an original idea, this has been duplicated thousands of times over. That said, it's a nice attempt.
Here are a few things that might improve it.
-Work on the photo a little more, maybe a little more contrast.
-I don't know alot about polaroid photos but I've never seen ones that look like that, they generally have even white space on all sides except one.
-Try taking it a step farther, doing something to make it your own, original design.
Here is a simple example of something more you could do with this.
Originally Posted by Mosh Clockwise
love the idea of using polaroids 8/10
I understand what you're going for. I think "anarchy" should be a bit more bold, either a stronger typeface or just make it bold. The "order" side is what could be improved the most, I think alot more could me done to relay the idea to the viewer, I would suggest ditching the black square and going with something a little less geometric. I would take a good look at the colors you chose also, they don't really do much for the design. *get rid of those snowflakes*
Here is something I did awhile ago for a event t-shirt.
Annual event for classic cars, used classic pinstripes and vegas style sign and text. The cars where provided by the client as standard non-digital photo's and had to be scanned in and cleaned up. This wasn't quite finished, the client decided they wanted something different.