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Old 03-11-2009, 05:35 PM #1114
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8/10 not too shabby for first time illustrator. maybe make it not so stretched.

Messing around out of boredom brings this simple PS.
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Old 03-11-2009, 06:40 PM #1115
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9/10 looks fresh just not overly impressive

-made this for one of the in n out stores in AZ for their softball tournament
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Old 03-12-2009, 09:53 PM #1116
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first time using illustrator, made a logo for a project im doing in a marketing class
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Old 03-14-2009, 02:56 AM #1117
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6/10- just not catching my eye saying wow. i think more could of been done with the back

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Old 03-14-2009, 12:37 PM #1118
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love the idea of using polaroids 8/10

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Old 03-14-2009, 05:24 PM #1119
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what would make it a 10?
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Old 03-14-2009, 05:59 PM #1120
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what would make it a 10?
First and foremost, please don't text post here.

By most peoples standards 10/10 would be unattainable for this, not because it's not good but because it isn't an original idea, this has been duplicated thousands of times over. That said, it's a nice attempt.
Here are a few things that might improve it.

-Work on the photo a little more, maybe a little more contrast.

-I don't know alot about polaroid photos but I've never seen ones that look like that, they generally have even white space on all sides except one.

-Try taking it a step farther, doing something to make it your own, original design.

Here is a simple example of something more you could do with this.


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love the idea of using polaroids 8/10

6/10

I understand what you're going for. I think "anarchy" should be a bit more bold, either a stronger typeface or just make it bold. The "order" side is what could be improved the most, I think alot more could me done to relay the idea to the viewer, I would suggest ditching the black square and going with something a little less geometric. I would take a good look at the colors you chose also, they don't really do much for the design. *get rid of those snowflakes*

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Here is something I did awhile ago for a event t-shirt.
Annual event for classic cars, used classic pinstripes and vegas style sign and text. The cars where provided by the client as standard non-digital photo's and had to be scanned in and cleaned up. This wasn't quite finished, the client decided they wanted something different.

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Old 03-15-2009, 01:13 AM #1121
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I always wanted to do something like that with the vegas style. Looks good.

I probably already posted this before, but whatever. I hardly have any time to do photoshops for fun anymore

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Old 03-15-2009, 11:01 PM #1122
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The yellow outline on the golf part is too much IMHO

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Old 03-21-2009, 10:06 AM #1123
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5 very very blury. This one i made through paint first and then put it in photoshop and stretched the outside of the circle. First time in photoshop.


Second picute i just went back to paint plopped it in and added lettering.
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Old 03-21-2009, 10:39 AM #1124
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like 1.. sorry bro i dont see anything in that picture done in photoshop. i understand your just starting and all but still.

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Old 03-21-2009, 10:55 AM #1125
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9/10 the grain i think needs to be a little bolder in some spots in my opinion but very nice, i would buy that mini anyday.

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Old 03-21-2009, 11:42 AM #1126
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6/10. You should restrict yourself to one or two fonts. All you need to fix is the top part, then you'll be set.


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Old 03-22-2009, 08:03 PM #1127
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umm......like 5/10 idk, it might look cool with out the buildings or the random block with stars or the blam text.



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Old 03-23-2009, 01:08 AM #1128
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Old 03-23-2009, 02:59 AM #1129
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lol 6/10
be better if you added more detail to their attire to go along with it.


Not sure what I was trying to do but I just got really bored with the brush tool and decided to make like a apocalyptic type nuclear scenario...



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Old 03-23-2009, 09:31 AM #1130
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Old 03-23-2009, 10:58 AM #1131
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You gotta be able to persuade your clients to chose different fonts if they're that bad.

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Old 03-23-2009, 03:02 PM #1132
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You gotta be able to persuade your clients to chose different fonts if they're that bad.

2/10

[IMG]http://www.mjmfx.com/clientfiles/paintballsphere/logo.jpg[IMG]
looks great 9/10, only sugestion is to maybe add some more black imaging towards the bottom of the logo, all the black floral brushings on the top kinda throw it out of balance.

Im posting this again because people in here tend to suck at rating the picture above them (ie: not rating it at all).

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Old 03-23-2009, 03:15 PM #1133
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You gotta be able to persuade your clients to chose different fonts if they're that bad.

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[IG]http://www.mjmfx.com/clientfiles/paintballsphere/logo.jpg[/IMG]
But that's the thing, the text wasn't that bad. It's more of a watermark than anything which makes it very cool due to the "transparent" font. He uses it for his images. Yeah, thanks....
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Old 03-26-2009, 07:37 PM #1134
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looks good i like it, like the subtle gradients too 8/10



*edit* haha facebook jpg rape, too lazy to upload twice so it'll do
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