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Old 04-02-2007, 07:48 PM #1
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i want some critisim

i wanna know what you think and what i should work on
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i wanted to start taking pictures and this is what i took

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Old 04-02-2007, 07:49 PM #2
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I'll wait and hear what everyone else has to say....
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Old 04-02-2007, 07:53 PM #3
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I'll wait and hear what everyone else has to say....
If you have to wait for other people, you should just butt out completely.
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Old 04-02-2007, 07:55 PM #4
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1. Turn your flash off, it's completely blowing out the subject.
2. get out of that dang auto mode, use it in manual.
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Old 04-02-2007, 08:04 PM #6
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Well...they're not good lol. What kind of camera are you using? Turn it to manual (like Drex said) and mess with the settings.

Keep messing with it, learn the effects of shutter speed, ISO, and Aperature and take a look around at some of the work people post in this forum. It's a learning thing just keep trying. I will give you a word of advice that will save your *** in these forums: NEVER post pictures unless you can seriously say to yourself "wow those are good pictures."


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I'll wait and hear what everyone else has to say....
Supr beat me to it, but if you're not brave enough to post your own thoughts and risk having someone disagree with you then you might as well not have posted.
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Old 04-02-2007, 08:05 PM #7
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when you looked at these pictures, what did you think?
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Old 04-02-2007, 08:12 PM #8
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bugs being abducted by aliens?

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well the first one, not only is the flash comepletely ruining anything that could have been good about this pic, but i didnt even know what the hell i was looking at.

and the second one.... flash......

but b4 u post a pic, try to crtique urself first... make a mental list of what is good and what is bad, then try to fix the bad and make the list again... but i cant think of one good thing to list... just keeping shooting and keep learning and keeping an open mind
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Old 04-02-2007, 08:17 PM #10
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bugs being abducted by aliens?

hhahah no man its Heaven... GO INTO THE LIGHT

But ya remove the flash, over exposed
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Old 04-02-2007, 08:43 PM #12
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They're basically garbage.

Think about it this way: When you first started masturbating, it was an awkward thing. You didn't really know how to stroke it, and it was more of an exploration of sorts. You certainly weren't proud of it either and rarely talked about your "newfound funtime" with your friends.

Photography is the same. Don't come back to this forum unless you know how to blow your own load in 10 seconds flat.
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Old 04-02-2007, 08:46 PM #13
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See SuPrBuGmAn, that's what I meant.
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They're basically garbage.

Think about it this way: When you first started masturbating, it was an awkward thing. You didn't really know how to stroke it, and it was more of an exploration of sorts. You certainly weren't proud of it either and rarely talked about your "newfound funtime" with your friends.

Photography is the same. Don't come back to this forum unless you know how to blow your own load in 10 seconds flat.

OMG I'M SIGGING THAT ****!
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Original thought, create some.
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Original thought, create some.
Sorry, don't feel like being an *** today. I'll leave it to the pros.

I mean, there's not much to say. It's a picture of a moth. Not one of those colorfull ones - it's an ugy *** moth.

As for helpfull insight: Find a better subject.
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God damn Supr I would sig you too if I had room.

This thread delivers.
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Just gonna pile on the pain lol.

They are both bad...Poor contrast and exposure, especially on the second one.
I can tell your using a point and shoot with on-board flash.
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Supr and larry, I want so sig you both.OP, too much is not a good thing, more intresting subjects.Listen to Larry
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