Originally posted by The_Kids_Are_Alright
I'm no critic, but I think you need to pull back a little on the subjects. (So you can see the whole thing.)
No way. If he was using a 4x5 view camera, then maybe, but using the format that he is using, he SHOULD be getting closer to really focus on abstracting the elements and creating a design based photograph. If he backed up, then the photo would be just a picture of a building, and not talk about the spacial relationships of the negative space the sky creates with the line and form of the buildings.
Good work Tom!!!